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Array ( [sid] => 157754 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angel [time] => 2010-02-25 09:47:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Flickering eyes in a vaguely lit arena
Lips red from the pressure of her teeth
Face curved like perfect architecture
Creeping slowly nearer like a thief
To steal the touch I’ve waited for
Basking in the warmth of friction
Noises of the action floods my ears
Continuing to feed the addiction
Of the very thought of the perfect angel
Whose wings have trapped me.
My bittersweet reason to believe
In something never meant to be

Gently gripped by her talons
My angel’s got me dreaming
In sweet lament, longing for her scent
Until desperation has tears streaming
Down my face, thinking of a better place
With her.

Trailing a single finger along her jaw line
Her lips; soft and quivering, pale from the cold
I sigh and watch her move with every breath
So many things I want to say and haven’t told
Like how she makes my world turn around
How she’s the only reason that I breathe
And although I know I don’t deserve you
I just can’t seem to want to leave
I’ll wait forever and a day for you
Through the anger, the pain and sorrow
And I would give up all of my yesterdays
Just to be in your tomorrow
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Angel

Contributed by JoseyJ on Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 09:47:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Flickering eyes in a vaguely lit arena
Lips red from the pressure of her teeth
Face curved like perfect architecture
Creeping slowly nearer like a thief
To steal the touch I’ve waited for
Basking in the warmth of friction
Noises of the action floods my ears
Continuing to feed the addiction
Of the very thought of the perfect angel
Whose wings have trapped me.
My bittersweet reason to believe
In something never meant to be

Gently gripped by her talons
My angel’s got me dreaming
In sweet lament, longing for her scent
Until desperation has tears streaming
Down my face, thinking of a better place
With her.

Trailing a single finger along her jaw line
Her lips; soft and quivering, pale from the cold
I sigh and watch her move with every breath
So many things I want to say and haven’t told
Like how she makes my world turn around
How she’s the only reason that I breathe
And although I know I don’t deserve you
I just can’t seem to want to leave
I’ll wait forever and a day for you
Through the anger, the pain and sorrow
And I would give up all of my yesterdays
Just to be in your tomorrow




Copyright © JoseyJ ... [ 2010-02-25 09:47:27]
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Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 05:39:47 PM AEST
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Great imagery and awesome, beautiful, classic writing from the heart.

Very well done!

Thanks,

Tim
cool dude


Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 05:41:08 PM AEST
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P.S. 5/5




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