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Array ( [sid] => 15765 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The haunted moor [time] => 2003-04-11 13:35:00 [hometext] => This poem is based on a sweet little girl who was everyone's darling.She was snatched by the cruel hands of death [bodytext] => Long ago,among an era of strange likings,
among the harsh,mighty Vikings,
there lived a girl so cozy,
they called her little Lucie

Her golden locks on a face so cute,
such as to make the hardest play a flute.
her mesmerizing laughter so infectious,
the greatest of plays turn fictitious.
her voice delicate like the fresh dew,
the sweetest of birds seem to mew.
In a lonely wild moor,she used to play,
with the harshest of mortals in her sway.

Strange are the vagrant breezes
of mighty fate,
to strike the little one at her own gate.
A violent illness took it's toil,
disintegrating her into a paper foil.

Still now,after many brews of strong ales,
the wild ,forsaken moor tells it's hidden tales.
The bravest feel daunted,
they say the moor is haunted. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ravi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The haunted moor

Contributed by ravi on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Long ago,among an era of strange likings,
among the harsh,mighty Vikings,
there lived a girl so cozy,
they called her little Lucie

Her golden locks on a face so cute,
such as to make the hardest play a flute.
her mesmerizing laughter so infectious,
the greatest of plays turn fictitious.
her voice delicate like the fresh dew,
the sweetest of birds seem to mew.
In a lonely wild moor,she used to play,
with the harshest of mortals in her sway.

Strange are the vagrant breezes
of mighty fate,
to strike the little one at her own gate.
A violent illness took it's toil,
disintegrating her into a paper foil.

Still now,after many brews of strong ales,
the wild ,forsaken moor tells it's hidden tales.
The bravest feel daunted,
they say the moor is haunted.

Copyright © ravi ... [ 2003-04-11 13:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The haunted moor (User Rating: 1 )
by cant-skate on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 01:42:25 PM AEST
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so beautifully written!ans sad...LOVED IT!

Re: The haunted moor (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:33:29 AM AEST
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such images!! Well done
Michelle

Re: The haunted moor (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:40:11 AM AEST
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well done.. venkat

Re: The haunted moor (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:33:08 AM AEST
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most vividly excellent!
hugs nessa

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