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Array ( [sid] => 157619 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Sad Truth [time] => 2010-02-20 06:54:08 [hometext] => This was when this guy was pestering me, but I didn't want to hurt his feelings so I wrote this. [bodytext] => Don't you see,
There is no we,
There never was,
And never has.

Don't you see,
It's troubling me,
The hurt and pain,
Is all in vain.

Don't you see,
I want to be free,
But you pursue,
And can't see what I'm going through.

Can't you hear,
My screams filled with fear,
It's YOU who does this,
You send me to the abyss.

Can't you Feel,
My great ordeal,
It's not me it's you,
but oh if you only knew.

Can't you let go,
I'm in intense woe,
For you, you see,
don't understand my plea...

I have to go,
I must lie low,
And when I return,
YOU WILL NOT YEARN...

Written By Laura Westhead. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 50 [informant] => X_xlaurax_X12 [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Feb 20, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

The Sad Truth

Contributed by X_xlaurax_X12 on Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 06:54:08 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Don't you see,
There is no we,
There never was,
And never has.

Don't you see,
It's troubling me,
The hurt and pain,
Is all in vain.

Don't you see,
I want to be free,
But you pursue,
And can't see what I'm going through.

Can't you hear,
My screams filled with fear,
It's YOU who does this,
You send me to the abyss.

Can't you Feel,
My great ordeal,
It's not me it's you,
but oh if you only knew.

Can't you let go,
I'm in intense woe,
For you, you see,
don't understand my plea...

I have to go,
I must lie low,
And when I return,
YOU WILL NOT YEARN...

Written By Laura Westhead.

Copyright © X_xlaurax_X12 ... [ 2010-02-20 06:54:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Sad Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessi95 on Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 08:13:15 PM AEST
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wow, this full of pain and fear, i can almost acually feel it...i love it

Re: The Sad Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Avataar on Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 09:41:37 AM AEST
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Great write

Re: The Sad Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by MissJones on Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 11:03:22 AM AEST
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I can really feel this and relate also. Great work :)

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