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Array ( [sid] => 157611 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ...Welcome to hell. [time] => 2010-02-19 22:32:53 [hometext] => I wrote this poem inspired -somehow- by a song called Evilized by Dream Evil. Hope you all enjoy. [bodytext] => So you drank the forbiden wine
Now my curse runs through your veins
You have decided to follow my path
You chose to be free, now let me in

Deny the rules, deny the laws
There's nothing to worry, you now have it all
Live for me, breathe me in
I'll make you fly, and witness the beauty of a darkening sky

Close your eyes, be my disguise
Open your heart, Let me inside
Drink some more, soon you will die
To be born again, without a soul to attend

Give me your sadness, give me your joy
Leave behind everything you've ever worked for
I'll be everything you need, make me everything you want
I'll let you live your dream, and I won't ask for anything in exchange

Your fantasies now will become realities
You will feel the pleasure you could ever imagine
From me you will feed, my blood is the water for my little seed
From now on, you will only worship me

I've now become your god, I am what you desire most
You're lifeless now, but there's no pain
You only took the first step, of a long road ahead
But guess what? There's no stop...nor an end...

...Welcome to Hell. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Xaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
...Welcome to hell.

Contributed by Xaven on Friday, 19th February 2010 @ 10:32:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



So you drank the forbiden wine
Now my curse runs through your veins
You have decided to follow my path
You chose to be free, now let me in

Deny the rules, deny the laws
There's nothing to worry, you now have it all
Live for me, breathe me in
I'll make you fly, and witness the beauty of a darkening sky

Close your eyes, be my disguise
Open your heart, Let me inside
Drink some more, soon you will die
To be born again, without a soul to attend

Give me your sadness, give me your joy
Leave behind everything you've ever worked for
I'll be everything you need, make me everything you want
I'll let you live your dream, and I won't ask for anything in exchange

Your fantasies now will become realities
You will feel the pleasure you could ever imagine
From me you will feed, my blood is the water for my little seed
From now on, you will only worship me

I've now become your god, I am what you desire most
You're lifeless now, but there's no pain
You only took the first step, of a long road ahead
But guess what? There's no stop...nor an end...

...Welcome to Hell.




Copyright © Xaven ... [ 2010-02-19 22:32:53]
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Re: ...Welcome to hell. (User Rating: 1 )
by ChaosFactor on Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 09:35:28 PM AEST
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Fantastic description of the power of the blood.. Or the darkness.. The addiction of your choice.
Take care.




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