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be that amazed,life takes the toll pay the
price,get your ticket come see the show
now your chance come see the clown.

Laugh out loud for all to hear,turn the knife
watch me bleed,come on down get real
close,now your chance to see me drown.
kick me now I'm on the ground,don't you
stop the end is near,don't expect a tear

Put me down, I'm your subject of amusement
I'll play your fool,your clown in this circus
of love,enjoy the show you have your fun
done now,hope you enjoyed the show
was it worth the entrance fee?, OH! yes
see your smile, just watch love die.
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Your Clown

Contributed by Fuzzy on Friday, 19th February 2010 @ 03:24:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

For all i gave nothing changed,should i really
be that amazed,life takes the toll pay the
price,get your ticket come see the show
now your chance come see the clown.

Laugh out loud for all to hear,turn the knife
watch me bleed,come on down get real
close,now your chance to see me drown.
kick me now I'm on the ground,don't you
stop the end is near,don't expect a tear

Put me down, I'm your subject of amusement
I'll play your fool,your clown in this circus
of love,enjoy the show you have your fun
done now,hope you enjoyed the show
was it worth the entrance fee?, OH! yes
see your smile, just watch love die.

Copyright © Fuzzy ... [ 2010-02-19 15:24:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your Clown (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 19th February 2010 @ 05:49:16 PM AEST
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A feeling of depression,,But well written.
Hope...you are O.K..
God bless.
-venkat

Re: Your Clown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th February 2010 @ 09:54:04 PM AEST
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I have been the clown
and I can say The only pleasure
is seeing that other person in that same position
The game is painful yet it goes on
I enjoyed the trip to the circus
nicely written

-D.Truth

Re: Your Clown (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 01:44:32 AM AEST
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For all I gave nothing changed,the sadness and the anger behind the clowns face,very powerful write x

Re: Your Clown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 08:58:49 AM AEST
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This is a great write. Clowns have always tripped me out because they are such a conflicted object of the public and you hit it on the head. I'll make you laugh while I die a little on the inside for a cheap fee.

"kick me now I'm on the ground,don't you
stop the end is near,don't expect a tear"

Excellent write.

take care
duff

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