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so shy and scared of every move,
as days went by Id hear your cry to give your love,
and to be loved, you had a ways to catch up,
to learn our ways, but learnt you did,
and taught us of your ways too.
sweet little thing no bigger then a farret,
but a big boy in your eyes, we learned all the secretes of love,
you and me, you never left my side, mostly on my lap you'd be.
then this dreadfull morning came, just of the porch to pee,
safe I thought you would be, I was so wrong when three
big dogs came running in you ran they chased you took your life.
Oh little one I held you for the last time as you looked in my eyes,
I cried, told you I was here, but you couldnt hold on, I trulely loved you my little
boy, and ask GOD to set you'll soul free, to wait for me, someday we will be again
in the end.
RIP GORDY
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my little friend rip

Contributed by longhaircg on Wednesday, 17th February 2010 @ 07:44:31 AM in AEST
Topic: PetPoems

When I first met you little friend,
so shy and scared of every move,
as days went by Id hear your cry to give your love,
and to be loved, you had a ways to catch up,
to learn our ways, but learnt you did,
and taught us of your ways too.
sweet little thing no bigger then a farret,
but a big boy in your eyes, we learned all the secretes of love,
you and me, you never left my side, mostly on my lap you'd be.
then this dreadfull morning came, just of the porch to pee,
safe I thought you would be, I was so wrong when three
big dogs came running in you ran they chased you took your life.
Oh little one I held you for the last time as you looked in my eyes,
I cried, told you I was here, but you couldnt hold on, I trulely loved you my little
boy, and ask GOD to set you'll soul free, to wait for me, someday we will be again
in the end.
RIP GORDY

Copyright © longhaircg ... [ 2010-02-17 07:44:31]
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Re: my little friend rip (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Wednesday, 17th February 2010 @ 10:59:14 AM AEST
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how very sad sorry for your loss

Re: my little friend rip (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Wednesday, 17th February 2010 @ 11:09:46 AM AEST
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Hi, I'm real sorry for your loss.
losing a loved pet is
heart breaking, i lost
my cat just last month
my thoughts are with
you.

Take care
Fuzzy

Re: my little friend rip (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th February 2010 @ 01:05:01 AM AEST
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I do not cry very easily but this really really choked me up. I am so sorry for your loss.

I also think it's horrid that (at least from what I can tell) people let their dogs run where they may only to end up destroying yours.

Take care,

Tim

Re: my little friend rip (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Thursday, 18th February 2010 @ 03:40:10 AM AEST
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Thankyou friends, for all your kind words,
he was just a little chawowe he thought
he was a big dog and he was in many ways of love. Thankyou all again.
SP

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