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Array ( [sid] => 157469 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fall Through [time] => 2010-02-12 18:43:08 [hometext] => I wrote this for a girl I fell for [bodytext] => If any of this poem is used in any way, please give credit to me, Corey, the author of this poem.

Title: Fall Through

Im falling fast through the sky,
Trying to catch myself and learn to fly.
This feelings I have is weighing me down,
Telling myself Im not gonna hit the water, Im not gonna drown.
Im gonna soar to you with this feeling,
Always letting you know you are so appealing.

I've come to realize Im falling for this absolute amazing girl,
The thoughts of you in my mind continuously twist and twirl.
There are many ramifications that come with the word "love"
Past, present, future; Fear, trust and more to think of.
But I have to follow my heart because it knows what it wants
Do you feel the same way or are we just a couple of flaunts?

This stage of life that your going through may be really rough,
But to me, I will always know that you are good enough.
Like you said you deserve nothing but the best,
For me I wish to travel on that quest.
No one in my life has ever made me think about anything as much as you
My feelings and intentions to be the best for you are all very, very true.

If you ever have a sinking feeling, then call me to help you float,
For your smile and happiness, my life I will devote.
So here it is, the move I call the “Fall Through”
Im going to tell you straight, I really want to be with you. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 117 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Pomazey864 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Fall Through

Contributed by Pomazey864 on Friday, 12th February 2010 @ 06:43:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



If any of this poem is used in any way, please give credit to me, Corey, the author of this poem.

Title: Fall Through

Im falling fast through the sky,
Trying to catch myself and learn to fly.
This feelings I have is weighing me down,
Telling myself Im not gonna hit the water, Im not gonna drown.
Im gonna soar to you with this feeling,
Always letting you know you are so appealing.

I've come to realize Im falling for this absolute amazing girl,
The thoughts of you in my mind continuously twist and twirl.
There are many ramifications that come with the word "love"
Past, present, future; Fear, trust and more to think of.
But I have to follow my heart because it knows what it wants
Do you feel the same way or are we just a couple of flaunts?

This stage of life that your going through may be really rough,
But to me, I will always know that you are good enough.
Like you said you deserve nothing but the best,
For me I wish to travel on that quest.
No one in my life has ever made me think about anything as much as you
My feelings and intentions to be the best for you are all very, very true.

If you ever have a sinking feeling, then call me to help you float,
For your smile and happiness, my life I will devote.
So here it is, the move I call the “Fall Through”
Im going to tell you straight, I really want to be with you.




Copyright © Pomazey864 ... [ 2010-02-12 18:43:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Fall Through (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Saturday, 13th February 2010 @ 10:26:55 AM AEST
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I love this its so straight up, as I call it. while reading this it brings to me what I would love to hear.
SP




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