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Tazmien
Contributed by
daylynn_van_wyk
on
Wednesday, 10th February 2010 @ 12:24:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Oh' celestial queen
grace me with thou presence,
life's greatest pleasures
lie in the faintest sight
Of you, but is it lust?
which captivates thy soul?
Or the desire to firmly hold?
So I extend my hand to thee
an invitation to my dreams,
beyond the milky way
A voyage down passionate streams
merging souls in the infinite seas
a pure love consumes all
and floats gently upon a breeze.
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daylynn_van_wyk
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2010-02-10 12:24:14]
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Re: Tazmien
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 07:55:55 PM AEST
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This is wonderful. It reads very clean and it's beautifully written.
take care
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