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Array ( [sid] => 157406 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Hero [time] => 2010-02-09 22:01:10 [hometext] => My take on the traditional secret admirer's note. [bodytext] => You remind me of a courageous knight
Before he goes into battle, a beautiful
Melody strung from cupids arrow, the
Whisper of hope.
Your smile is as wide as a mile with
The glow of a golden sunset.
Your eyes are deep and all knowing
That carry within them multicolored
Flexes of serenity which boldly shine
Through you.
Your voice is soft like the crooning of a bird
Before it’s song, the flutter of a serenade.
Your personality blushing with the hues of honorable
Righteousness that make all cling to be forever
By your side, and in your countenance.
When I am with you I long to stop the ticking of Father Time’s
Clock so I can stay in your presence,
Which feels like paradise flown to earth.

Signed,

One love struck maiden. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 33 [informant] => JakerBaker88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
Dear Hero

Contributed by JakerBaker88 on Tuesday, 9th February 2010 @ 10:01:10 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



You remind me of a courageous knight
Before he goes into battle, a beautiful
Melody strung from cupids arrow, the
Whisper of hope.
Your smile is as wide as a mile with
The glow of a golden sunset.
Your eyes are deep and all knowing
That carry within them multicolored
Flexes of serenity which boldly shine
Through you.
Your voice is soft like the crooning of a bird
Before it’s song, the flutter of a serenade.
Your personality blushing with the hues of honorable
Righteousness that make all cling to be forever
By your side, and in your countenance.
When I am with you I long to stop the ticking of Father Time’s
Clock so I can stay in your presence,
Which feels like paradise flown to earth.

Signed,

One love struck maiden.



Copyright © JakerBaker88 ... [ 2010-02-09 22:01:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Dear Hero (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 11:52:16 PM AEST
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Some inventive clichés here along with great imagery. Oh, and I do not mean anything bad about clichés as I myself am Mr. Cliché Man. smiley

Thank you very much for an enjoyable read.

Tim




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