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Perfect hair and an intoxicating smile
I have not seen someone like you in a while
But you are everything I think I want
Someone like you will never be alone
There's someone always waiting for you
I close my eyes, smile, and see you in my home
Hold me the way I want to be held
Sit with me at dinner and get lost in my eyes
I deserve someone like you
I know though, I'm not good enough
Deep down I know this and it's hurtfull and rough
Still I wish you were mine
A quick glance
A quick moment that's chance
Is all that this will ever be
In five minutes you wont remember me
But I will remember you for all eternity. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 43 [informant] => btrays [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Wanting

Contributed by btrays on Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 07:32:52 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Through my eyes I see perfect skin
Perfect hair and an intoxicating smile
I have not seen someone like you in a while
But you are everything I think I want
Someone like you will never be alone
There's someone always waiting for you
I close my eyes, smile, and see you in my home
Hold me the way I want to be held
Sit with me at dinner and get lost in my eyes
I deserve someone like you
I know though, I'm not good enough
Deep down I know this and it's hurtfull and rough
Still I wish you were mine
A quick glance
A quick moment that's chance
Is all that this will ever be
In five minutes you wont remember me
But I will remember you for all eternity.

Copyright Â© btrays ... [ 2010-02-06 07:32:52]
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Re: Wanting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 08:22:12 AM AEST
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It's a painful thing, the feeling of inadequacy. And it paralyzes us unapologetically. Anyone who is good, deserves all the happiness this world has to offer. Your words are sad but relative. I'm not sure I know a single person who hasn't felt the way you describe here, at least once in their existence. Overcoming that can be a difficult challenge. Our own fears can overwhelm us so dramatically, that we don't realize how wonderful we truly are. Very thought provoking write.

Seléne ~

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