 |
Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+ |
Custom Search
|
|
|
||||
| Welcome ! | Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link | 29-May 15:32:22 AEST | ||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
Array
(
[sid] => 15729
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Sweetheart...what did you do today?
[time] => 2003-04-10 23:05:00
[hometext] => This poem i wrote for my friend who committed suicide. I put it in first person as if it were her talking. The poem is a typical run down of a conversation her and her mother would have. Please comment! I want some feedback from it..... Thanx - Jo
[bodytext] => Mom's dellusional
dysfunctional She doesn't know me or what i do everyday. But one day My mom will ask me... "Sweeheart, what did you do today?" I'll reply "Well, I slit my wrists today." But she'll slumber off, becoming sound asleep. She'll pick me up from school at 2:30 but i can never count on it cuz she is always late. Its quiet for a moment or two... "Honey, what did you do today?" Once again, I reply "Hmmmm, I slit my wrists today." But her eyes wander over the windshield not once looking at me...but at a nearby head on collision. I call home saying i'm staying at a friends house... "I dont care" she replies and hangs up the phone. underneath my breath i mumble "By the way, I slit my wrists today." I'm in my bed....ready to let myself go. I can see a new world clearly now. Mom will notice (if she is up) that Im not up. It might take her awhile. But soon she'll open my door And noice I slit my wrists today. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 36 [informant] => delerioustearz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
|
Menu
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©
Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster
All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com
All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.
Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com