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Array ( [sid] => 157283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => lonely [time] => 2010-02-05 10:39:49 [hometext] => solitude gets to you after awhile [bodytext] => I need to get out of here just to see some friendly faces
get out of these empty spaces,
a strangers hello with faces all aglow,
Hear words that are not mine, from others they can flow,
I will sit and I will listen, nothing will I be missing,
silly jokes from other folks, just make me smile,
if only for a little while.
I'll make believe I'm happy, and I fit right in with my silly grin,
a differant place a differant time, yes it will be mine,
just a little while please I need to smile.
I just need to get out here for a little while
I need to find a smile.
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lonely

Contributed by longhaircg on Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 10:39:49 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

I need to get out of here just to see some friendly faces
get out of these empty spaces,
a strangers hello with faces all aglow,
Hear words that are not mine, from others they can flow,
I will sit and I will listen, nothing will I be missing,
silly jokes from other folks, just make me smile,
if only for a little while.
I'll make believe I'm happy, and I fit right in with my silly grin,
a differant place a differant time, yes it will be mine,
just a little while please I need to smile.
I just need to get out here for a little while
I need to find a smile.

Copyright Â© longhaircg ... [ 2010-02-05 10:39:49]
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Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 10:42:24 AM AEST
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Nice write, i know the feeling very well.

Take care
Fuzzy

Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 12:02:08 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this. Nicely done. Oh, and here is another smile for you. smiley

Take care,

Tim

Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 10:54:09 PM AEST
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wow. I really relate to this. I was just telling someone how sometimes the solitude (being alone) can really drive one insane at times. This was a gentle reminder that others feel what we feel. Go through similar emotions and all. Thank you. It was great to read this tonight. :)

Seléne ~

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