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Aunque no la veas te digo
Esta a mi lado
Siempre sigue aquí conmigo
Y toma mi mano y me escalofrío

Es el fantasma de un amor perdido
Se la jugaron fue dejada en el camino
Y no se baja de mi coche aunque le pido

Y aunque adelante se acaba el camino
Sigo derecho sin freno a mi destino

Mi corazón acelerado siempre puede reventar
Porque sigue a mi lado ella no me va dejar

Y tuerce el camino a toda velocidad
Y ella a mi lado rumbo a la felicidad

Es el fantasma de un amor perdido
Se la jugaron fue dejada en el camino
Y no se baja de tu coche te lo digo

Y aunque la trates de evitar es tu destino
Desconocida compañanera del camino
La oscuridad en el crucero
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Fantasma

Contributed by jaavys on Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Retroceder ya no puedo
Aunque no la veas te digo
Esta a mi lado
Siempre sigue aquí conmigo
Y toma mi mano y me escalofrío

Es el fantasma de un amor perdido
Se la jugaron fue dejada en el camino
Y no se baja de mi coche aunque le pido

Y aunque adelante se acaba el camino
Sigo derecho sin freno a mi destino

Mi corazón acelerado siempre puede reventar
Porque sigue a mi lado ella no me va dejar

Y tuerce el camino a toda velocidad
Y ella a mi lado rumbo a la felicidad

Es el fantasma de un amor perdido
Se la jugaron fue dejada en el camino
Y no se baja de tu coche te lo digo

Y aunque la trates de evitar es tu destino
Desconocida compañanera del camino
La oscuridad en el crucero
Amor perdido

Copyright Â© jaavys ... [ 2003-04-07 23:25:00]
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Re: Fantasma (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:02:02 AM AEST
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it took me a while to translate but i love this, great comparisons, kinda sad though.... hugs nessa

Re: Fantasma (User Rating: 1 )
by jaavys on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:23:18 PM AEST
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Hey Nassa, good to hear from you, I can't believe you went to all that trouble. You actually translated it.
Let me tell you something about it. There is an old song called, Amor Perdido, translation lost love. It's an old pop song, 1950's.
The song is about a ghost, fantasma, and she was picked up on the highway and done wrong. Now it appears she hitchhikes on the road and when a man picks her up , he discovers she is a ghost and out to get her revenge. The incident takes place at a crossroad, amor perdido. I love this song. Let me know next time and I will help you. Many things are lost in translation. I think in english then i translate into spanish, but then i can't translate them back into english. I know it's crazy but, I guess i'm crazy. later

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