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SURPRISED AT HOW THE SPARKLE IN YOUR EYE MADE ME SMILE

WHEN I FIRST HEARD YOUR VOICE I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED THAT SUCH A BEAUTIFUL SOUND COULD CAUSE SUCH A STIRRING INSIDE

WHEN I FIRST FELT THE SENSE OF JOY IN MY HEART I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED THAT MY HEART WOULD ALLOW THIS FEELING OF HAPPINESS BACK IN

WHEN I FIRST FELT THE TOUCH OF YOUR HAND I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED THAT SUCH A SIMPLE TOUCH COULD MAKE MY WHOLE BODY TREMBLE

WHEN YOU FIRST PUT YOUR LIPS TO MINE I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED THAT WHEN THE FIRST KISS WAS GONE I COULDN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT TO BEGIN

WHEN I FIRST KNEW I WAS FALLING FOR YOU I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED AT HOW VULNERABLE IT FELT TO OPEN MY HEART TO A FEELING THAT HAD BEEN SURPRESSED FOR SO LONG

BUT I'M NOT SURPRISED AT HOW A MAN AS AMAZING AS YOU CAN BRING LIGHT BACK INTO MY LIFE AT A TIME WHEN IT WAS LEAST EXPECTED..... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 2 [informant] => VICTIC [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

SURPRISED

Contributed by VICTIC on Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 06:29:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

WHEN I FIRST SAW YOUR FACE I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED AT HOW THE SPARKLE IN YOUR EYE MADE ME SMILE

WHEN I FIRST HEARD YOUR VOICE I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED THAT SUCH A BEAUTIFUL SOUND COULD CAUSE SUCH A STIRRING INSIDE

WHEN I FIRST FELT THE SENSE OF JOY IN MY HEART I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED THAT MY HEART WOULD ALLOW THIS FEELING OF HAPPINESS BACK IN

WHEN I FIRST FELT THE TOUCH OF YOUR HAND I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED THAT SUCH A SIMPLE TOUCH COULD MAKE MY WHOLE BODY TREMBLE

WHEN YOU FIRST PUT YOUR LIPS TO MINE I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED THAT WHEN THE FIRST KISS WAS GONE I COULDN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT TO BEGIN

WHEN I FIRST KNEW I WAS FALLING FOR YOU I WAS SURPRISED.....
SURPRISED AT HOW VULNERABLE IT FELT TO OPEN MY HEART TO A FEELING THAT HAD BEEN SURPRESSED FOR SO LONG

BUT I'M NOT SURPRISED AT HOW A MAN AS AMAZING AS YOU CAN BRING LIGHT BACK INTO MY LIFE AT A TIME WHEN IT WAS LEAST EXPECTED.....

Copyright © VICTIC ... [ 2010-02-02 06:29:14]
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Re: SURPRISED (User Rating: 1 )
by Rykor on Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 01:40:29 PM AEST
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A very sweet, beautiful poem. Nicely done.

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