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Array ( [sid] => 157164 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unwanted [time] => 2010-02-01 17:47:38 [hometext] => er..........this is sorta how im feeling right now so um just enjoy [bodytext] =>

You say you love me,
I start to believe it's true,
Then you turn me away just like that,
I feel so unwanted,
now and Again,
Mom says I can do better when I do my best
Dad doesn't care,
People say cant you just be someone else and not yourself?
It makes me feel so unwanted
I want that to change but it's impossible,
You will never love me,
Mom and Dad will never be proud,
And everyone will always want me to be someone im not
I'm just so unwanted [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 13 [informant] => WishUponAStar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Unwanted

Contributed by WishUponAStar on Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 05:47:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You say you love me,
I start to believe it's true,
Then you turn me away just like that,
I feel so unwanted,
now and Again,
Mom says I can do better when I do my best
Dad doesn't care,
People say cant you just be someone else and not yourself?
It makes me feel so unwanted
I want that to change but it's impossible,
You will never love me,
Mom and Dad will never be proud,
And everyone will always want me to be someone im not
I'm just so unwanted

Copyright © WishUponAStar ... [ 2010-02-01 17:47:38]
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Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 06:23:17 PM AEST
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I am definitely feeling like this right now. If you need to talk, I am here. This is a great poem!!!

Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 04:02:16 AM AEST
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In life you can only try your best.
remember you are as good
as anyone else, sure they
would, should, be proud
you can write poetry.

Take care
Fuzzy

Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by WishUponAStar on Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 05:32:05 AM AEST
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Thank you guys,I'll write more poetry,
And thank you for saying you'll be there if I ever need to talk

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