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Array ( [sid] => 157103 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Her Time To Cry! [time] => 2010-01-30 21:20:38 [hometext] => Depression is a terrible thing. And what is worse than the sickness itself is watching someone you love suffer with it. [bodytext] => She walks into the bedroom,
and sits down on the bed.
ain't it funny how the night,
can put thoughts in your head.

She stares into the darkness,
moonlight sparkles in her eyes.
and soon she'll hang her head,
and he watches as she cries.

He knows that it is useless,
and somethings just not right.
he wants to take her in his arms,
and hold her through the night.

She screams I'm going crazy
am I losing my mind?
don't tell me you can't see it,
why the hell are you so blind?

He's at a loss for words,
he's not sure what to say.
and in his heart he's wishing,
he could take her pain away.

So he sits down beside her,
he too stares at the moon.
he knows it's gonna be awhile,
and will all be over soon. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 284 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Tory [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Feb 19, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Her Time To Cry!

Contributed by Tory on Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 09:20:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

She walks into the bedroom,
and sits down on the bed.
ain't it funny how the night,
can put thoughts in your head.

She stares into the darkness,
moonlight sparkles in her eyes.
and soon she'll hang her head,
and he watches as she cries.

He knows that it is useless,
and somethings just not right.
he wants to take her in his arms,
and hold her through the night.

She screams I'm going crazy
am I losing my mind?
don't tell me you can't see it,
why the hell are you so blind?

He's at a loss for words,
he's not sure what to say.
and in his heart he's wishing,
he could take her pain away.

So he sits down beside her,
he too stares at the moon.
he knows it's gonna be awhile,
and will all be over soon.

Copyright © Tory ... [ 2010-01-30 21:20:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Her Time To Cry! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 10:45:27 PM AEST
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She's realy fortunate to have your luv, compassion, understanding and patience.
This is a masterpeice.
Thank God over five years a go a dr. put me on zooloft. It certainly works for me.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Her Time To Cry! (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 11:01:13 PM AEST
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You are right it is very difficult to watch someone going through depression a very lonely journey often impermeable to words......So he sits down beside her...... being there so that they can get through the next minute next hour as you have shown in your poem is the one thing you can do

Re: Her Time To Cry! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessi95 on Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 08:56:59 PM AEST
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This shows great emotion, I love the anger, love, and pain it is so good,
*The Death poem*

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