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My Allison comes in bloom
How can I ever compare to you
Like a dream to be awakened

Flowers grow in your hair
They soak the sun and calm the rain
To the depths of pouring gray
A shade of green in a long December

Sparkled white in red lipstick
Your smile spreads like a butterfly
Taking steps and blown away
Clouds of footprints walk across the sky

The ocean blue swims in your eyes
Forever drawn upon your face
Shining rivers and beautiful lakes
Painted just like the weather

Softly spoken like a bird in flight
Flying home beneath the starry night
If love was as opposite as black and white
Then I'd be wrong just to make you right

Like a pen worn upon a page
Ink dipped darkness radiates
Words written in a fog of blue
The only light I see is you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 43 [informant] => zedwards [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Allison

Contributed by zedwards on Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 07:48:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I sing a song for you
My Allison comes in bloom
How can I ever compare to you
Like a dream to be awakened

Flowers grow in your hair
They soak the sun and calm the rain
To the depths of pouring gray
A shade of green in a long December

Sparkled white in red lipstick
Your smile spreads like a butterfly
Taking steps and blown away
Clouds of footprints walk across the sky

The ocean blue swims in your eyes
Forever drawn upon your face
Shining rivers and beautiful lakes
Painted just like the weather

Softly spoken like a bird in flight
Flying home beneath the starry night
If love was as opposite as black and white
Then I'd be wrong just to make you right

Like a pen worn upon a page
Ink dipped darkness radiates
Words written in a fog of blue
The only light I see is you

Copyright © zedwards ... [ 2010-01-29 07:48:26]
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Re: Allison (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 11:14:56 AM AEST
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this is beautiful ...ur poem has a very sweet rhythm
Its well very 'poetic'...very refreshing words
creates a picture of a clean, bright summer of love
I love the last six lines especially
brilliant !

Re: Allison (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 03:45:44 PM AEST
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Full of vivid imagery,which poured out throughout the length of this piece.
I'm sure this will inspire more people to take up a pen to try and command the page as you have here.
Thanks for sharing

Steve

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