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Play
Contributed by
thesearemywords
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Tuesday, 26th January 2010 @ 05:24:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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If life is a play,
Encounter is the script;
Love is the melody,
Feeling, the lyrics.
If life is a play,
Earth is the stage;
Personality is the actor,
Voice, the chorus.
If life is a play,
Extravagance is the costume;
Support is the prop,
Joy, the lights.
If life is a play,
Birth is the opening line;
Life is the story,
Death, the final scene.
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Re: Play
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Tuesday, 26th January 2010 @ 07:43:24 AM AEST (User
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This flows really nicely with a wonderful parallel for life as a play, great imagery and a feeling of completion for the picture it creates |
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Re: Play
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th January 2010 @ 01:40:26 PM AEST (User
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Well written and I like how you made it all connect to form a nice picture for the reader. |
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