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broken hearted
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 05:57:21 AM in AEST
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stab the knife in
open my chest plate
seperate thy rib cage
and sqeeze the life out of me
i guess it is my fault
i gave the witch the blade
i guess it is my fault
never again will my rib cage mend
i guess it is my fault
we are something i can not comprehend
close me up
or leave me exposed
it matters not
because your mouth will still kill
i guess it is my fault
i never should of believed
i guess it is my fault
i should of known what i've seen
i guess it is my fault
since there is no one else to blame
so stab me again
let me know it's you
don't go slow
you can never mend
the things that you aways do
it's okay
believe me it's okay
you're not to blame
it's all my fault
so kill me again
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Re: broken hearted
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by fallensaint on
Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 06:28:41 AM AEST
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Wow this gave me chills when I read it
So full of emotion and VERY VERY well written |
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Re: broken hearted
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 07:16:49 AM AEST
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wow this was such a sad poem.
I loved it
keep writing.
great job. |
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Re: broken hearted
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 22nd January 2010 @ 02:45:57 AM AEST
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As already said, also gave me the chills and very well written.
Take care
Fuzzy
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Re: broken hearted
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th May 2014 @ 11:40:08 AM AEST
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beautifully written, i love your second
stanza best, hugs n' love nessa
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