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Array ( [sid] => 156844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I am not ok [time] => 2010-01-21 05:37:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am not okay

I cut myself
to feel the pain
of thy inner cell
to let my brain know
i am still real

but it runs and callogulates
so i wonder if this is life
or just a feeling i truelly hate
like a cloud that will never eleviate
i'm fog, never truelly high

So i yell outside
is this heaven or hell
like i really care
so i cry
just relieve me of this air
this inner cell
just so i can find a center above thyself [comments] => 2 [counter] => 296 [topic] => 72 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )
I am not ok

Contributed by rhei76 on Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 05:37:45 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



I am not okay

I cut myself
to feel the pain
of thy inner cell
to let my brain know
i am still real

but it runs and callogulates
so i wonder if this is life
or just a feeling i truelly hate
like a cloud that will never eleviate
i'm fog, never truelly high

So i yell outside
is this heaven or hell
like i really care
so i cry
just relieve me of this air
this inner cell
just so i can find a center above thyself




Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2010-01-21 05:37:45]
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Re: I am not ok (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 09:50:16 AM AEST
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This is a very powerful poem. I love the raw emotion and the place it takes me. I have added a few suggestions- take or leave them. But your poem is very, very good!

I cut myself
to feel the pain
of (my)thy inner cell
to let my brain know
I am real

As it runs and coagulates
I wonder if this is life
or just a feeling I truly hate.

Like a cloud that will never elevate
I am fog, never truly high

I yell (inside) outside
is this heaven or hell
It’s not like I really care
so I cry
just relieve me of this air
this inner cell
so I can find a center above (myself) thyself


Re: I am not ok (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2006 on Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 10:03:37 PM AEST
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wow really good




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