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Array ( [sid] => 156814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My heart is torn. [time] => 2010-01-20 02:51:00 [hometext] => I can't stand when you say I'm cute or I love you. [bodytext] => Your voice is soft and calming. Oceans sea reflects the sun light on my face. The sun gives me warmth.
"My love is more than words" I know how you love me know. It pains me. I want more than what you have for me.
I wouldn't dare break it. But your like my life. Every time I leave you I look back. In pain. The last time we saw each other. It was brief. We didn't get to speak. But I know what will happen in that conversation. It'll tear me in two. Don't change because you read this. Change because you want to. Not for my well being. I can only bear this for so long. This time it's different.
This time.. I loose this fight. Love is overrated. Everyone wants it. So few get it.... I've been broken. My soul is crushed. My heart is loveless. Rushing sea's take my life. I can't handle it anymore.... As fast as sound. As quick as light. I've died....Inside.

I _________ You more than words.



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My heart is torn.

Contributed by Fluxy on Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 02:51:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Your voice is soft and calming. Oceans sea reflects the sun light on my face. The sun gives me warmth.
"My love is more than words" I know how you love me know. It pains me. I want more than what you have for me.
I wouldn't dare break it. But your like my life. Every time I leave you I look back. In pain. The last time we saw each other. It was brief. We didn't get to speak. But I know what will happen in that conversation. It'll tear me in two. Don't change because you read this. Change because you want to. Not for my well being. I can only bear this for so long. This time it's different.
This time.. I loose this fight. Love is overrated. Everyone wants it. So few get it.... I've been broken. My soul is crushed. My heart is loveless. Rushing sea's take my life. I can't handle it anymore.... As fast as sound. As quick as light. I've died....Inside.

I _________ You more than words.



Authors, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.





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Re: My heart is torn. (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensaint on Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 07:35:51 AM AEST
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hmmm... Very good write. I can relate


Re: My heart is torn. (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 10:50:04 AM AEST
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Yes how sad love can be, well written.

Take care
Fuzzy




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