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Array ( [sid] => 1568 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blacksides [time] => 2002-08-01 21:17:39 [hometext] => Another on the topic of teenage angst, but this one was written from the third-person perspective of myself watching my little sister. Thus, it came out with a more mature sound than my earlier works. [bodytext] => a quick switch of the switch makes a swish and a wish that it really won稚 sting that much this time
and leave me alone no leave me alone no leave me alone no leave
and down on my knees like everyone else but I知 doing this not for myself
and crying aloud and gritting my teeth and waiting to turn seventeen
I知 waiting to turn seventeen
and cry out for what I deserve
first place is within reach
and I deserve it all
and the switch and the swish and the swish and the itch and the itch and the sting from the switch
and leave me at home leave me alone leave me alone or just leave me
I wish you壇 run away
I deserve first place
I can have anything I want
even you
when I grow up
but for now
I知 waiting to turn seventeen
I知 waiting to turn seventeen [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Butterat_Zool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Blacksides

Contributed by Butterat_Zool on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 09:17:39 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



a quick switch of the switch makes a swish and a wish that it really won稚 sting that much this time
and leave me alone no leave me alone no leave me alone no leave
and down on my knees like everyone else but I知 doing this not for myself
and crying aloud and gritting my teeth and waiting to turn seventeen
I知 waiting to turn seventeen
and cry out for what I deserve
first place is within reach
and I deserve it all
and the switch and the swish and the swish and the itch and the itch and the sting from the switch
and leave me at home leave me alone leave me alone or just leave me
I wish you壇 run away
I deserve first place
I can have anything I want
even you
when I grow up
but for now
I知 waiting to turn seventeen
I知 waiting to turn seventeen




Copyright ツゥ Butterat_Zool ... [ 2002-08-01 21:17:39]
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Re: Blacksides (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:58:20 AM AEST
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Cool, well written.




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