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Array ( [sid] => 156799 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => weaving life's betrays [time] => 2010-01-19 09:55:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’m tied between the unknown
Wondering which way it curbs,
The scale point to my destiny
Towards my soundness or insanity of being,

Lost in the world of delusions
Creating words to satisfy my needs,
It feels so real and times so blind
In all I know it was bent,

I often scale behind the fog
Searching for some light,
Was it ever meant for me?
Are we really destined?

Feelings of eternal beat
Caressing my being,
Thoughts linger from a source
Unknown to my being,

I arise and try to see
It seems were tied deep within,
To a never ending theme
To a knot with no beginning,

I will lay my questions
In an unseen envelope,
In the breeze I set
The white pigeon free,

See you can’t tie life down
That’s meant to last…

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weaving life's betrays

Contributed by eshine on Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 09:55:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I’m tied between the unknown
Wondering which way it curbs,
The scale point to my destiny
Towards my soundness or insanity of being,

Lost in the world of delusions
Creating words to satisfy my needs,
It feels so real and times so blind
In all I know it was bent,

I often scale behind the fog
Searching for some light,
Was it ever meant for me?
Are we really destined?

Feelings of eternal beat
Caressing my being,
Thoughts linger from a source
Unknown to my being,

I arise and try to see
It seems were tied deep within,
To a never ending theme
To a knot with no beginning,

I will lay my questions
In an unseen envelope,
In the breeze I set
The white pigeon free,

See you can’t tie life down
That’s meant to last…

Copyright Â© eshine ... [ 2010-01-19 09:55:08]
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Re: weaving life's betrays (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 06:14:19 PM AEST
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this is a very felt deep poem. I enjoyed this alot .. i love emotional deep poems. it sounds like you are confused with things and trying to figure some things out.

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