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[sid] => 156739
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Living a Lie
[time] => 2010-01-16 14:08:35
[hometext] => I don't really like the flow of this poem at all, so give me feedback on what you think. thanks
[bodytext] => I wake myself each day. Breakfast served right away. Go about life like any other. Continue one after another. But this is not me. This is just a dream. My life is empty, A hollowed theme. My family is wrong. My hatred is strong. My respect is dissolved. Problems are unresolved. My father took trust away. My mother accommodates. I hate them both so much. My sanity awaits. Authors, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 279 [topic] => 6 [informant] => jecox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
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