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A careless smoker,
A flame battler,
A smoke choker,

A frantic search,
A bucket of water,
A burning house,
A missing daughter,

A stiff young body,
A smoke filled room,
A scream of anguish,
A room of gloom,

A final cough,
A retired chest,
A family burn,
A man and his princess rest. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 364 [topic] => 22 [informant] => theurbanpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Flames Of Guilt

Contributed by theurbanpoet on Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 06:13:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A whiskey drinker,
A careless smoker,
A flame battler,
A smoke choker,

A frantic search,
A bucket of water,
A burning house,
A missing daughter,

A stiff young body,
A smoke filled room,
A scream of anguish,
A room of gloom,

A final cough,
A retired chest,
A family burn,
A man and his princess rest.

Copyright © theurbanpoet ... [ 2010-01-14 18:13:28]
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Re: Flames Of Guilt (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 06:28:19 PM AEST
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This is oddly charming. It has a riddle like almost tragic fairytale feel to it. Great job.

- Bleedthelove

Re: Flames Of Guilt (User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Friday, 15th January 2010 @ 11:44:38 PM AEST
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I like this one right here, i could almost feel the sadness and depression manifest, deeper and deeper until it reached a tradgic end. Good write and keep it up:)

Re: Flames Of Guilt (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th January 2010 @ 07:44:22 PM AEST
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Everything seemed to fit very well while reading this. Between the imagery and the story being told, it's great.

Well written!

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