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Array ( [sid] => 156692 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sin's law [time] => 2010-01-13 19:15:14 [hometext] => I dont know why i wrote it . .and didnt even think about it . . just flowed.. [bodytext] => There's a secret deep inside its something i will always hide.

This secret will bring me to my fate if only i could learn not to hate.

The anger of my haunted past a memory that will forever last.

Sinking in darkness drowning in pain ill never hear you voice again.

I'll cry and scream out for you from the darkest depths of hell where i am destined to burn
for my mistake was from my past i could never learn.

Days and nights many will pass all the same all and endless walk of shame.

The starting line is long since past i wonder just how long in this race i will last.

I'm looking forward to that quiet room where the darkest spirits of evil will bring me to my doom.

I asked for this from the very start from the very first beat of my dying heart.

And this my dear is where we part so long farewell hell is waiting Satan calls i hear his dark voice already echoing off those hallowed halls.

In to the darkest depths of hell i go what wil happen there no one shall know because this is where i leave you too to wonder and ponder and some day wander there too...


do you understand? i know i don't i just .. . had to write it..

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Sin's law

Contributed by hayeslauran on Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 07:15:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



There's a secret deep inside its something i will always hide.

This secret will bring me to my fate if only i could learn not to hate.

The anger of my haunted past a memory that will forever last.

Sinking in darkness drowning in pain ill never hear you voice again.

I'll cry and scream out for you from the darkest depths of hell where i am destined to burn
for my mistake was from my past i could never learn.

Days and nights many will pass all the same all and endless walk of shame.

The starting line is long since past i wonder just how long in this race i will last.

I'm looking forward to that quiet room where the darkest spirits of evil will bring me to my doom.

I asked for this from the very start from the very first beat of my dying heart.

And this my dear is where we part so long farewell hell is waiting Satan calls i hear his dark voice already echoing off those hallowed halls.

In to the darkest depths of hell i go what wil happen there no one shall know because this is where i leave you too to wonder and ponder and some day wander there too...


do you understand? i know i don't i just .. . had to write it..





Copyright © hayeslauran ... [ 2010-01-13 19:15:14]
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Re: Sin's law (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 04:47:06 AM AEST
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Very chilling!
Superb write.....
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