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Array ( [sid] => 15666 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Before It's Too Late [time] => 2003-04-06 17:25:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's as if you took
A love under construction
And turned it into
A game of destruction

When the time came
A time of dire need
You made it a joke
I felt my heart bleed

Since that time
Now five months or so
I've tried to heal
From that fatal blow

Every thing I saw
Every thing I read
Sent images of you
Tripping my head

So you can lump me,
In with the "jerks and losers"
But darling you've made
This beggar a chooser

The pain still lingers
Like an old curse
Today I thank God
It could have been worse

I gave you my heart
That was my fate
I'm glad you discarded
Before it's too late

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ThirtyDays [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Before It's Too Late

Contributed by ThirtyDays on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 05:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It's as if you took
A love under construction
And turned it into
A game of destruction

When the time came
A time of dire need
You made it a joke
I felt my heart bleed

Since that time
Now five months or so
I've tried to heal
From that fatal blow

Every thing I saw
Every thing I read
Sent images of you
Tripping my head

So you can lump me,
In with the "jerks and losers"
But darling you've made
This beggar a chooser

The pain still lingers
Like an old curse
Today I thank God
It could have been worse

I gave you my heart
That was my fate
I'm glad you discarded
Before it's too late

Copyright © ThirtyDays ... [ 2003-04-06 17:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Before It's Too Late (User Rating: 1 )
by rainbowstar on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 05:39:26 PM AEST
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beautifully written..i like the way you wrote it ^^ good luck..keep writing

L.L

Re: Before It's Too Late (User Rating: 1 )
by Jilly on Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:31:09 PM AEST
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God wants us to meet a few wrong people before meeting the right one so we will know how to be grateful.... Excellent write... You have captured emotions in this write that most are ashamed to share... i feel it...
Jilly

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