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Array ( [sid] => 156535 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stay [time] => 2010-01-06 12:43:35 [hometext] => A poem I wrote for my dear love. [bodytext] => I’ll never leave you this I know
The greatest love for you I show
Please don’t doubt me I won’t lie
Round my finger knots are tied
One for each the words I promised
Now I can’t forget my promise
Stay With you a love forever
Forever cannot end so never
Will I leave you all alone
Without you here my heart is stone
You give me hope my life is happy
As long as you don’t leave I’m happy
Pull you close against my chest
Lay your head and get some rest
You're safe with me don’t be afraid
I'll clean up the mess we've made
When you wake life will be perfect
Life that you deserve is perfect
My love for you will never die
The very hardest I will try
To keep you happy you're the best
You're so much different than the rest
How am I to be so lucky
You love me that’s why I’m lucky
You are perfect in my eyes
A heart that never cheats or lies
A loving being pure and good
Just as any angel should
I love you true with all my heart
With you with me this life can start
I’ll take you with me where I go
If you follow I will know
That you love me as I do you
And that is perfect.




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Stay

Contributed by redmurcury on Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 12:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I’ll never leave you this I know
The greatest love for you I show
Please don’t doubt me I won’t lie
Round my finger knots are tied
One for each the words I promised
Now I can’t forget my promise
Stay With you a love forever
Forever cannot end so never
Will I leave you all alone
Without you here my heart is stone
You give me hope my life is happy
As long as you don’t leave I’m happy
Pull you close against my chest
Lay your head and get some rest
You're safe with me don’t be afraid
I'll clean up the mess we've made
When you wake life will be perfect
Life that you deserve is perfect
My love for you will never die
The very hardest I will try
To keep you happy you're the best
You're so much different than the rest
How am I to be so lucky
You love me that’s why I’m lucky
You are perfect in my eyes
A heart that never cheats or lies
A loving being pure and good
Just as any angel should
I love you true with all my heart
With you with me this life can start
I’ll take you with me where I go
If you follow I will know
That you love me as I do you
And that is perfect.




redmurcury, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




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Re: Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 02:29:25 PM AEST
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I like your rhyming scheme in this poem.
The fact that you have repeated some of your end words two lines running,
really makes this original and unique....
Very nicely done!
Star x x x




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