Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 16:04:41 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 156522 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => That Night [time] => 2010-01-05 18:08:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => That Night

My soul faded into the darkness
That night
you save my soul from being crushed
Even though you save me
It still feels like I am drowning deep down inside me
That night
You embrace me
You touch me and it felt like fire
Melting me to the core
That night
You told me you loved me
It sting my heart with ache
I too loved you but I could not say it
That night
You scent disappear
You disappear ,all of you
I was scared
That night
I thought I could not live without you
You were like a drug to me
So addicted to you
I wanted more of you
That night
Here am I drowning once again
My soul faded deeper and deeper
I wished you were here
That night
My whole life changed
Now here am I living in peace
Even though you are not here
I know someday we will meet again
Maybe we will meet in heaven like you once told me
Maybe we will meet there
In the highest heaven I will always look up to see for face in the sky
That night
Many years past
And now here I stand in that place you once told me
Maybe now we can be together forever...

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Loveless17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

That Night

Contributed by Loveless17 on Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 06:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

That Night

My soul faded into the darkness
That night
you save my soul from being crushed
Even though you save me
It still feels like I am drowning deep down inside me
That night
You embrace me
You touch me and it felt like fire
Melting me to the core
That night
You told me you loved me
It sting my heart with ache
I too loved you but I could not say it
That night
You scent disappear
You disappear ,all of you
I was scared
That night
I thought I could not live without you
You were like a drug to me
So addicted to you
I wanted more of you
That night
Here am I drowning once again
My soul faded deeper and deeper
I wished you were here
That night
My whole life changed
Now here am I living in peace
Even though you are not here
I know someday we will meet again
Maybe we will meet in heaven like you once told me
Maybe we will meet there
In the highest heaven I will always look up to see for face in the sky
That night
Many years past
And now here I stand in that place you once told me
Maybe now we can be together forever...

Copyright Â© Loveless17 ... [ 2010-01-05 18:08:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticmercury on Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 08:39:39 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

"I know someday we will meet again
Maybe we will meet in heaven like you once told me
Maybe we will meet there
In the highest heaven I will always look up to see for face in the sky"

..great write!!enjoyed a lot..

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com