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Array ( [sid] => 156520 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye Love [time] => 2010-01-05 15:16:02 [hometext] => Poem I wrote for a friend about his girlfriend. She has changed. [bodytext] => Why is it you've gone away
Things I'd do to make you stay
Where's the one I used to love
Where's the girl who's my true love
Why have you left me forsaken
Crushed my heart left what you've taken
Screaming in my head won’t stop
Crying in my head won’t stop
I know that I messed up by why
You act as though I didn't try
How could you do the things I did
Return the feelings you forbid
I cannot stand the fact you've changed
I can’t lay back ignore the pain
You have to give me back my love
Gentle sweet soft like a dove
I miss the times that we have shared
Left me broken beat and scared
Don’t you leave me here not now
I'll get you back to me somehow
I don’t believe that all is lost
I can survive but at what cost
Are you worth more than my life
Do you even care about my life
And after all is said and done
Will I be left the only one
Standing on a hill alone
Feelings that you've truly shown
Don’t understand why you don’t care
All I know it isn't fair
I know you're going through hard times
Don’t lose your hope I'll give you mine
If you choose to push me away
Not much longer I can stay
With you treating me this way
I’m just a body built to sway
All emotions must have left
Cause I can’t feel them nothing left
What's it going to take to feel
Nothing’s right and Nothings real
Help me please to understand
Let me know you understand
If this is what our love will stay
I do not want you anyway
I really miss you please come back
I miss the real you please come back
I fear that if you don’t return
The life we have will take a turn
To you my dear, love I will send
This is how our love will end....
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Goodbye Love

Contributed by redmurcury on Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 03:16:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Why is it you've gone away
Things I'd do to make you stay
Where's the one I used to love
Where's the girl who's my true love
Why have you left me forsaken
Crushed my heart left what you've taken
Screaming in my head won’t stop
Crying in my head won’t stop
I know that I messed up by why
You act as though I didn't try
How could you do the things I did
Return the feelings you forbid
I cannot stand the fact you've changed
I can’t lay back ignore the pain
You have to give me back my love
Gentle sweet soft like a dove
I miss the times that we have shared
Left me broken beat and scared
Don’t you leave me here not now
I'll get you back to me somehow
I don’t believe that all is lost
I can survive but at what cost
Are you worth more than my life
Do you even care about my life
And after all is said and done
Will I be left the only one
Standing on a hill alone
Feelings that you've truly shown
Don’t understand why you don’t care
All I know it isn't fair
I know you're going through hard times
Don’t lose your hope I'll give you mine
If you choose to push me away
Not much longer I can stay
With you treating me this way
I’m just a body built to sway
All emotions must have left
Cause I can’t feel them nothing left
What's it going to take to feel
Nothing’s right and Nothings real
Help me please to understand
Let me know you understand
If this is what our love will stay
I do not want you anyway
I really miss you please come back
I miss the real you please come back
I fear that if you don’t return
The life we have will take a turn
To you my dear, love I will send
This is how our love will end....




Copyright © redmurcury ... [ 2010-01-05 15:16:02]
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