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I think about how I could form pictures in them and make patterns all night
Tonight I listen to the rain
I listen to the deafening crack of thunder as it shakes the house
I look at the lightening as it blinds me with how beautiful and natural it is
Tonight I stay to ponder life
To ponder about my family
To ponder about my friends
Tonight as I lay in bed
I weep for i have hurt the ones I love
So tonight as I fall asleep
I think about the life god gave me and how lucky I am to have it
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Tonight

Contributed by theunknown on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 12:08:35 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac



Tonight I look up at the stars and think about how beautiful they are
I think about how I could form pictures in them and make patterns all night
Tonight I listen to the rain
I listen to the deafening crack of thunder as it shakes the house
I look at the lightening as it blinds me with how beautiful and natural it is
Tonight I stay to ponder life
To ponder about my family
To ponder about my friends
Tonight as I lay in bed
I weep for i have hurt the ones I love
So tonight as I fall asleep
I think about the life god gave me and how lucky I am to have it




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Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 12:41:36 PM AEST
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Like this kind of write, i always find
the night brings out the very deep
thought in the mind, myself i
think this is well written


Take care
Fuzzy


Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 12:59:24 PM AEST
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I see, hear, feel and ponder with you x
This is a really lovely write, although I can find the sadness within it, it still makes me want to smile....
Star x x x


Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by musicrox13 on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 04:24:22 PM AEST
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i love your poem ur a wicked writer(:


Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by eshine on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 06:17:27 PM AEST
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wonderful words, i really enjoyed your writing!


Re: Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 08:50:45 PM AEST
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Very deep, ponderous thoughts. Nighttime is regret's mistress. Add to that the sheer force and emotion of thunder and lightning and you have the setting for a major soul searching. Wonderful poetry like this is one result of such a night. Powerfully moving.


Seléne ~




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