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Beguile and flaunt yourself, it makes me sick
My temples pulse and throb, jaws clenched

Head to toes and back, all I can think of is violence
Nameless, faceless
Inconsequential, I will make do with anyone
Give me something to exterminate

Render flesh and destroy simultaneous creation
It’s never enough to just bleed, it’s the beginning
This is my time

I cannot make you fathom my ideals
It would suffocate and asphyxiate the best of you
Card carrying members of false iconic perfection
Show me your hearts and minds, I will show you my pain

All I taste is bitter
All my sight is grey
All my touch is, is cold
So close, yet so far away
Let the levy break
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Pain

Contributed by ToxicityOfTheCity on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 12:23:22 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Bile rises and it’s all I can do to swallow
Beguile and flaunt yourself, it makes me sick
My temples pulse and throb, jaws clenched

Head to toes and back, all I can think of is violence
Nameless, faceless
Inconsequential, I will make do with anyone
Give me something to exterminate

Render flesh and destroy simultaneous creation
It’s never enough to just bleed, it’s the beginning
This is my time

I cannot make you fathom my ideals
It would suffocate and asphyxiate the best of you
Card carrying members of false iconic perfection
Show me your hearts and minds, I will show you my pain

All I taste is bitter
All my sight is grey
All my touch is, is cold
So close, yet so far away
Let the levy break

Copyright Â© ToxicityOfTheCity ... [ 2010-01-03 00:23:22]
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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 04:46:53 AM AEST
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I feel it here Tox, very deep....
You've ripped out your heart and drenched the page with it.
The depth of disgust is oozing from every pore, dirty, dark, meaningful.
Great write my friend x
Star x x x

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