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Array ( [sid] => 156429 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just a question [time] => 2010-01-02 03:20:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Just a question

Hello my dear fellows from YPCD
I have to admit there´s a question in me
Before all- I know that this poem is bad
But it should be nothing else- so, mates, don´t be too sad
It´s just that I needed a way to complain
About certain comments
(They´re really a shame)
They´re saying: 'Thumbs up', or 'Damn cool', or 'Hell yeah'
They beam 'Wonderful', or 'Awesome' or' Take care'
The claim you the master- yes, these were all quotes!
BUT
What happens to you when you look at the votes?
Expecting a "good"- having four stars in mind?
And finding just two- what´s the meaning behind
'Thumbs 'up after all when you find it undone
Without any help to just get where it´s gone?

Damn hell, I won´t demonize critics at all
I myself do write them, accept them, and call
For them every time that I face such events
As described above, or similar incidents
And I wonder, my God, is it really so hard
To tell what´s gone wrong- and if not- give reward
As every living poet needs to know where he stands

So please, dearest fellows, write useful comments!

With one smiling and one dropping eye
Libertina [comments] => 1 [counter] => 329 [topic] => 69 [informant] => Libertina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 10 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => poets )
Just a question

Contributed by Libertina on Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 03:20:18 AM in AEST
Topic: poets



Just a question

Hello my dear fellows from YPCD
I have to admit there´s a question in me
Before all- I know that this poem is bad
But it should be nothing else- so, mates, don´t be too sad
It´s just that I needed a way to complain
About certain comments
(They´re really a shame)
They´re saying: 'Thumbs up', or 'Damn cool', or 'Hell yeah'
They beam 'Wonderful', or 'Awesome' or' Take care'
The claim you the master- yes, these were all quotes!
BUT
What happens to you when you look at the votes?
Expecting a "good"- having four stars in mind?
And finding just two- what´s the meaning behind
'Thumbs 'up after all when you find it undone
Without any help to just get where it´s gone?

Damn hell, I won´t demonize critics at all
I myself do write them, accept them, and call
For them every time that I face such events
As described above, or similar incidents
And I wonder, my God, is it really so hard
To tell what´s gone wrong- and if not- give reward
As every living poet needs to know where he stands

So please, dearest fellows, write useful comments!

With one smiling and one dropping eye
Libertina




Copyright © Libertina ... [ 2010-01-02 03:20:18]
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Re: Just a question (User Rating: 1 )
by thesearemywords on Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 08:56:44 AM AEST
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This is so true! I have only just started using this site, but looking at other poems, I know how right you are.




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