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Array ( [sid] => 156421 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beautiful Oblivious [time] => 2010-01-01 17:02:08 [hometext] => I wrote this when I was 16. This is my first submisson. Criticism is appreciated. [bodytext] => She who they all admire,
They all hate.
She is comfortable wherever she sits,
With a secret vulnerability so subtle,
Only a very wise man could see.
Or woman.
She is passionate like no other,
And never is she dramatic.
Sometimes,
She sits in a world so far away,
You cannot hold a conversation,
Yet, you admire
How uninhibited she always is.
She's loud,
As the muscles of her face
Tighten and pull into her unique expression.
Silent, yes,
But no one can ignore her presence.
Her skin,
Although sun-spotted and blemished,
It glows.
She laughs,
And everyone in earshot cracks a smile.
Her eyes,
Although glazed,
Sparkle.
With wise wrinkles,
And beauty like no other,
She's confident.
And she never lets you see her cry.
And she is never afraid of her dark side.
She's been through enough
To keep her cool
As hot as Hell can be.
She's what everyone wants to be,
Or be with.
She means the world to everyone -
She has not a clue.
What they love
Is what makes her alone.
And as loved as she is,
Without a clue,
She doesn't care at all. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 73 [informant] => lovesheir420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Beautiful Oblivious

Contributed by lovesheir420 on Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 05:02:08 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

She who they all admire,
They all hate.
She is comfortable wherever she sits,
With a secret vulnerability so subtle,
Only a very wise man could see.
Or woman.
She is passionate like no other,
And never is she dramatic.
Sometimes,
She sits in a world so far away,
You cannot hold a conversation,
Yet, you admire
How uninhibited she always is.
She's loud,
As the muscles of her face
Tighten and pull into her unique expression.
Silent, yes,
But no one can ignore her presence.
Her skin,
Although sun-spotted and blemished,
It glows.
She laughs,
And everyone in earshot cracks a smile.
Her eyes,
Although glazed,
Sparkle.
With wise wrinkles,
And beauty like no other,
She's confident.
And she never lets you see her cry.
And she is never afraid of her dark side.
She's been through enough
To keep her cool
As hot as Hell can be.
She's what everyone wants to be,
Or be with.
She means the world to everyone -
She has not a clue.
What they love
Is what makes her alone.
And as loved as she is,
Without a clue,
She doesn't care at all.

Copyright © lovesheir420 ... [ 2010-01-01 17:02:08]
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Re: Beautiful Oblivious (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 11:33:07 PM AEST
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i like the strength going through this poem and the affirmation of who,'she' is in this world and the relationship the world has with her. Declaration of wisdom and experience as,She's been through enough to keep her cool as hot as hell can be.

Re: Beautiful Oblivious (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 06:52:55 AM AEST
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I agree totally with northernlights here.
The shere weight of strength this poem has to it is immense.
I enjoyed this very much indeed!
A VERY talented write!
Star x x x

Re: Beautiful Oblivious (User Rating: 1 )
by ChaosFactor on Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 08:23:36 PM AEST
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This is truly beautiful.. I feel like this could describe everyone, and that this is how everyone would like to be described. Just, no one hears this enough.
Fantastic!!
Take care.

Re: Beautiful Oblivious (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 07:34:03 PM AEST
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lovesheir420;

I quite enjoyed reading this poem. I really like poetry that can make you feel several different emotions at once and this did that for me.

There are several lines that i really like.

i like the simplicity of this line and that isn't a bad thing at all.
"She is comfortable wherever she sits".

The word usage stands out to me on this line. In those three words it's clear what you mean.
"With wise wrinkles".

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