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~Lunatic Disillusions~
Contributed by
inkmaster
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Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 05:06:08 PM in AEST
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~Lunatic Disillusions~
The lunatic bloodshed in me set me free,
Lost in a pitiable state of disillusion.
Always building the exact to wrong,
Misplaced to cavernous in a old decayed song.
I will never give up the fight that flows,
In my veins pending the last six penny nail,
Pummel down upon me.
Made out of yesterday and a strange mix,
Of today I feel the past unfold at me again,
Staggering me in reverse to a place deep, twisted,
And dead within. I must amulet twinge and
Suffering, is the a neon symbol that lights in
My eyes saying all banshee of the past,
There is a aperture in inks soul to torture,
Him before he does his occasion in the corroders,
Of Hell. Life is a haphazard reflection it must be,
Thought out not taking on a spin of the dice.
Look what it has cost me not only my sanity,
But the one whom really cared….
~Inkmaster~
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Re: ~Lunatic Disillusions~
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by Fuzzy on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 06:25:32 PM AEST
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Well written feel kindred spirit in many ways.
Take care
Fuzzy
Of Hell. Life is a haphazard reflection it must be,
Thought out not taking on a spin of the dice.
Look what it has cost me not only my sanity,
But the one whom really cared |
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Re: ~Lunatic Disillusions~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 08:03:51 PM AEST
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oh wow. Such discontent with the worst and deepest darkness. It's like swimming in the ocean at night ... very scary when we can't see the things that could possibly drown us. should we keep moving or just sit tight? This is amazingly profound. Words such as these make us feel we are not alone. Well done.
Seléne ~
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Re: ~Lunatic Disillusions~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 05:48:06 AM AEST
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Bordering morbid but human enough
to see the chaos sobering up enough for standers by to witness the torment and agony
without falling prey to it's depth
it moved so fast and would be confussing if it weren't so precise
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Re: ~Lunatic Disillusions~
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by ChaosFactor on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 09:31:38 AM AEST
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I think I get this.
Either way, great write. It portrays the chaos and insanity perfectly.
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Re: ~Lunatic Disillusions~
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by longhaircg on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 09:46:30 AM AEST
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Deep indeed, very well put
sp |
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