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[title] => I'm Sorry.
[time] => 2009-12-30 23:24:31
[hometext] => My first poem.
[bodytext] => I try and try, day and night. Even with no hope in sight. I try and try, with all my will, just to make it up to you. Again and again, I seem to fail, so please forgive me, please do. 'cause if you don't, they'res no hope. For me...or you.
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I'm Sorry.
Contributed by
flipztizzle
on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:24:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I try and try, day and night. Even with no hope in sight. I try and try, with all my will, just to make it up to you. Again and again, I seem to fail, so please forgive me, please do. 'cause if you don't, they'res no hope. For me...or you.
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Re: I'm Sorry.
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 12:00:46 AM AEST
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i Like it :)
keep going my friend :) |
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Re: I'm Sorry.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 02:27:36 AM AEST
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It's the hardest thing to try and please others
but as we live we realize we are not here to please each other
amazingly thats when people are pleased
great start it seems your a natural
-D.Truth |
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Re: I'm Sorry.
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 03:15:23 AM AEST
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Hiya, and welcome to YPDC!
This is a great first poem, I really like it!
Keep up the good work x
Star x x x |
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Re: I'm Sorry.
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by dirk-velvet on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 03:14:36 PM AEST
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nice pacing
and
flow.
Keep Um
Coming !
(good work !) |
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