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Array ( [sid] => 156347 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => .. PaiN inSide .. [time] => 2009-12-30 02:18:23 [hometext] => This is when i tried to spill my feelings on a paper .. [bodytext] => So this is it .. this is when you feel you wanna quit ..
when every thing turns back on you .. when you become a hypocrite ..
when you just stop and admit .. you give up .. no more of it ..
you wish you'd just erase your memory, forget ..
just close your eyes and let .. go of your soul, just to see how far it'd get ..
away from you, maybe ease the pain a bit ..
i bet it's not so long until, all this sadness and pain you feel again ..
your last hope was in vain .. even death you can't even gain ..
you're miserable for ever then .. stuck in this life sufferin' ..
livin' in hell .. fightin' your way up the hill ..
your hands are shakin', all of this got you weaken .. you slip, you fall, you can't even walk .. you crawl ..
you're at the bottom again after all ... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 32 [informant] => rumplestiltskin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
.. PaiN inSide ..

Contributed by rumplestiltskin on Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 02:18:23 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



So this is it .. this is when you feel you wanna quit ..
when every thing turns back on you .. when you become a hypocrite ..
when you just stop and admit .. you give up .. no more of it ..
you wish you'd just erase your memory, forget ..
just close your eyes and let .. go of your soul, just to see how far it'd get ..
away from you, maybe ease the pain a bit ..
i bet it's not so long until, all this sadness and pain you feel again ..
your last hope was in vain .. even death you can't even gain ..
you're miserable for ever then .. stuck in this life sufferin' ..
livin' in hell .. fightin' your way up the hill ..
your hands are shakin', all of this got you weaken .. you slip, you fall, you can't even walk .. you crawl ..
you're at the bottom again after all ...




Copyright © rumplestiltskin ... [ 2009-12-30 02:18:23]
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Re: .. PaiN inSide .. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 04:32:55 AM AEST
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So much truth here
I've been a the bottom of that hill plenty
thankfully we all see the top at one time or another
it's never ending but worth the strife
I enjoyed this poem sincerely

-D.Truth


Re: .. PaiN inSide .. (User Rating: 1 )
by bubble on Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 07:21:50 AM AEST
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I felt every word of this poem. Great Job!


Re: .. PaiN inSide .. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:30:00 PM AEST
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Damn. This was excruciating! But I'm not exactly sure whether it's out of empathy or the feeling it evokes within my very own skin. It's a testament to the poet when the reader feels the emotion as if it were his/her own. Well done! And I must say, that last line? Just ... damn. Do we ever get out?


Seléne ~




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