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Array ( [sid] => 156344 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mental Beatings [time] => 2009-12-29 22:52:07 [hometext] => Don't even read it, it's not that great. Wrote it in 5 minutes. [bodytext] => The little things you do
Make me go crazy.
A glance in my direction.
Kills me inside.
A smile.
Rips out my heart.
A hello.
Breaks it in two.

It kills me inside.
Because I know I can't have you.
You won't let me in.
You are leading me on.
Pretending.
Faking.
Lying.
Every little thing you do
Destroys me.

A nudge.
Kicks me in the side.
A hug.
Punches me in the face.
A conversation.
Leaves me unconscience.

A goodbye.
Puts me in the ground.

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Mental Beatings

Contributed by Jammy on Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 10:52:07 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The little things you do
Make me go crazy.
A glance in my direction.
Kills me inside.
A smile.
Rips out my heart.
A hello.
Breaks it in two.

It kills me inside.
Because I know I can't have you.
You won't let me in.
You are leading me on.
Pretending.
Faking.
Lying.
Every little thing you do
Destroys me.

A nudge.
Kicks me in the side.
A hug.
Punches me in the face.
A conversation.
Leaves me unconscience.

A goodbye.
Puts me in the ground.

Copyright © Jammy ... [ 2009-12-29 22:52:07]
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Re: Mental Beatings (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensaint on Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 11:26:54 PM AEST
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well i took the time to read it and i say that it is a really great write.
and i can relate.
take care

Re: Mental Beatings (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 12:02:38 AM AEST
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I agree this is a very good write, feel for you.

Take care
Fuzzy

Re: Mental Beatings (User Rating: 1 )
by ChaosFactor on Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 10:23:26 AM AEST
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This is incredibly well written.. And I can relate. Keep writing and take care.

Re: Mental Beatings (User Rating: 1 )
by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:58:45 PM AEST
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Why do you say it isn't that good ??
well i guess it's quite impressive .. speaks out what u have in there .. and that's what writing is all about :)
tc my friend ..

Re: Mental Beatings (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 01:32:32 AM AEST
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I think we all have experienced those feelings in one way or another.I think that you captured the emotions in our every day life.I mean when someone can't see how much they have hurt you with a word,sometimes it really makes you feel this way.Now that I rambled on like this... I am looking forward to more writes from you...well done.

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