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[title] => The loss of Two
[time] => 2009-12-29 20:39:13
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[bodytext] => It felt so perfect, it felt like forever When we were together, it felt unbreakable Like an invisible force, melding us together. It was true love, that’s unmistakable. I don’t know what happened, we hadn’t pulled through, I didn’t think I could love someone other than you But I did, I fell hard, for a boy in the hall. The first time I wanted him, alone at the mall. I needed him then, cause you weren’t there. When I needed you most, you didn’t care. You complained and you blamed, it was always my fault. What did you provide? An emotional assault. I left you for him, I thought he was better. He made me so happy, so I wrote you the letter. The truth, is what you asked, I gave you my answer. The hurt in your eyes, was my deadliest cancer. I hurt you, I loved you, you wanted me then, But I was with him, the one who’d I depend. You were lost for a bit, you’re life a turnover. You saw me with him, and knew it was over. I wanted you baby, I missed your touch. Though with this topic, I could not say much. I kept it to myself, my missing you pain. Not leaving you behind, cause you kept me sane. A short while after, I realised my mistake. I left you for someone, when you were mine to take. While being with someone else, what I really wanted was you. I spent time thinking this through, of what I could do. I couldn’t be with him, when I’m slowly losing you. I tried winning you back, I tried calling you out, I tried asking your forgiveness, I tried not to shout. I needed you back, that much was clear, But you’re happier this way, was my worst of fears. So I hurt the one who cared, and lost the one I’d shun. All you could say, was that we had our fun. Wasn't it more than that? Was it just a game to you? Now I can see, how I had lost two. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 136 [topic] => 22 [informant] => alovelyescape [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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