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Array ( [sid] => 156308 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Hurt [time] => 2009-12-28 20:01:41 [hometext] => i hope you like my poems. email me if u would like me to make you one. [bodytext] => it stings like a knife,
and kills like a bullet,
it hurts my heart,
everytime i go through it.

i want it to be over,
i just cant stand this pain,
please god help me,
i dont want to go through this again,

hes always been my 1st love,
i cant bare too loose him through her,
i dont want no one else,
god please help me sir.

for all i have done,
is love him to the full,
how can i love anyone else,
that would be so cruel.

i look at him now,
and i dont want to loose what i see,
she dont deserve him,
its suppose to be him and me.

to grow old together,
through thick and thin,
how can that happen,
if shes to take him.

he was mine first,
and i must fight for his love,
even if it takes the rest of my life,
till the heavens above.

if you love someone that much,
you just simply cant let them go,
i need him to stay mine,
hes got to tell her no. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 133 [topic] => 22 [informant] => charlene-fenny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My Hurt

Contributed by charlene-fenny on Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 08:01:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

it stings like a knife,
and kills like a bullet,
it hurts my heart,
everytime i go through it.

i want it to be over,
i just cant stand this pain,
please god help me,
i dont want to go through this again,

hes always been my 1st love,
i cant bare too loose him through her,
i dont want no one else,
god please help me sir.

for all i have done,
is love him to the full,
how can i love anyone else,
that would be so cruel.

i look at him now,
and i dont want to loose what i see,
she dont deserve him,
its suppose to be him and me.

to grow old together,
through thick and thin,
how can that happen,
if shes to take him.

he was mine first,
and i must fight for his love,
even if it takes the rest of my life,
till the heavens above.

if you love someone that much,
you just simply cant let them go,
i need him to stay mine,
hes got to tell her no.

Copyright © charlene-fenny ... [ 2009-12-28 20:01:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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