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Array ( [sid] => 156287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just out of Reach [time] => 2009-12-28 00:58:48 [hometext] => doesn't rhyme, and I'm sorry for any grammar errors. [bodytext] => He’s that guy who is right there, but just out of reach. The one whom I adore from a distance, exchange an occasional glance with, but never actually make any move to get to know him. Because you know him through his actions and your friends, he’s someone who does stupid stuff. He’s a stone wall, but really he’s broken inside.
Everything you see him do just makes you hate him, except you don’t care. He still creeps into your thoughts. You do everything you can to try to impress him, yet he never notices. And it feels like you're being rejected.
Even though it’s not a direct reject, it’s still a reject. He doesn’t ever look your way, and if he happens to get a glimpse of you, he certainly won’t be double-taking. The girl you least expect, he’ll swoop down on. Almost like a slap in your face.
Yet you think that he’ll change for you. He’ll want to be with you and only you. That he’ll swoon over the little things like your smile, the curve of your nose, or the way you stare off into space. He’ll like every little detail about you, and he’ll make you feel like the most important girl on earth.
Except… that’s never going to happen. And the really sick thing is, it’s okay because the guy you’ve built up in your head is all you need. So when he does happen to meet your gazing eyes, you see the guy who is analyzing every feature of your face which he finds so beautiful. You’ll blush and smile. Your stomach will do flips, yet he will never know.
Because he’s that guy right next to you, but just out of reach because the one you’re reaching for doesn’t exist.
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Just out of Reach

Contributed by kdoe on Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 12:58:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



He’s that guy who is right there, but just out of reach. The one whom I adore from a distance, exchange an occasional glance with, but never actually make any move to get to know him. Because you know him through his actions and your friends, he’s someone who does stupid stuff. He’s a stone wall, but really he’s broken inside.
Everything you see him do just makes you hate him, except you don’t care. He still creeps into your thoughts. You do everything you can to try to impress him, yet he never notices. And it feels like you're being rejected.
Even though it’s not a direct reject, it’s still a reject. He doesn’t ever look your way, and if he happens to get a glimpse of you, he certainly won’t be double-taking. The girl you least expect, he’ll swoop down on. Almost like a slap in your face.
Yet you think that he’ll change for you. He’ll want to be with you and only you. That he’ll swoon over the little things like your smile, the curve of your nose, or the way you stare off into space. He’ll like every little detail about you, and he’ll make you feel like the most important girl on earth.
Except… that’s never going to happen. And the really sick thing is, it’s okay because the guy you’ve built up in your head is all you need. So when he does happen to meet your gazing eyes, you see the guy who is analyzing every feature of your face which he finds so beautiful. You’ll blush and smile. Your stomach will do flips, yet he will never know.
Because he’s that guy right next to you, but just out of reach because the one you’re reaching for doesn’t exist.




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Re: Just out of Reach (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 01:42:23 AM AEST
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This is very good,does not have to rhyme.

Take care
Fuzzy


Re: Just out of Reach (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 05:35:49 AM AEST
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Hi! Welcome to YPDC!

This is a super write, and you are so right!
I look forward to reading more...

Star x x x




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