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Array ( [sid] => 156204 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => spaceman [time] => 2009-12-24 08:43:41 [hometext] => a poetic writing about an astronauts thoughts and feelings as he looks at the earth below whilst walking on the surface of the moon. [bodytext] => Earthly Decent, Inevitable to an earthling is lent,
Consideration of burning is spent,
I will fly, I will die, for one day it is told,
A union, a jack, should I dare for one time that I should possibly be so bold,
to sour, or to float, to discover, but never to gloat,
I will land, a foot touched,.... then a hand,
on a surface of rock, of dust, I dare you to mock!
my feet, my place, my touch, my experience, my grace,
My elligance untold, my passion, not bold,
I will step foot, I will touch down,
I will experience my final crown,
My care of what is your consideration loaned,
my destination, my experience, me senses are hoaned,
step, step,..... step, step,........ one small step at a time,
Existence I see, from a distance afar,
a man driving car, a mortal in race,
for this I embrace, I am dazzled be thee,
the mortal coil to throw to me that is he,
for 'man' to exist I am challeneged by view,
I look, I see, I know, as do you,
I will return as a human that is ultimately true.
But for now, I float in the heavens above,
an untimed existence, filled solely with love.


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spaceman

Contributed by adamski on Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 08:43:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Earthly Decent, Inevitable to an earthling is lent,
Consideration of burning is spent,
I will fly, I will die, for one day it is told,
A union, a jack, should I dare for one time that I should possibly be so bold,
to sour, or to float, to discover, but never to gloat,
I will land, a foot touched,.... then a hand,
on a surface of rock, of dust, I dare you to mock!
my feet, my place, my touch, my experience, my grace,
My elligance untold, my passion, not bold,
I will step foot, I will touch down,
I will experience my final crown,
My care of what is your consideration loaned,
my destination, my experience, me senses are hoaned,
step, step,..... step, step,........ one small step at a time,
Existence I see, from a distance afar,
a man driving car, a mortal in race,
for this I embrace, I am dazzled be thee,
the mortal coil to throw to me that is he,
for 'man' to exist I am challeneged by view,
I look, I see, I know, as do you,
I will return as a human that is ultimately true.
But for now, I float in the heavens above,
an untimed existence, filled solely with love.






Copyright © adamski ... [ 2009-12-24 08:43:41]
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Re: spaceman (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 09:19:27 AM AEST
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Love this i was up there looking out, great write

Take care
Fuzzy


Re: spaceman (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 09:37:46 AM AEST
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Lovely poem!
Wouldn't it be an awesome feeling and sight to see....
I think if it was me, I could quite happily take my last
breath looking down at the Earth in all her beauty.
Peaceful and serene, Im there right now!
Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year to you x
Star x x x





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