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Chipped away and battered
By guys who had always thought
That I simply didn't matter,
I had started to chip away
At my own inner-beauty
Until HE walked up to me,
Whistled, and said "Hey Cutie!"
I blushed and turned bright red
Oh my head was turning,
Then he asked me for my number
And I knew my face was burning.
He called me right after work
And set up our first date
We were a perfect match...
If someone could just relate
To the healing balm
That stretched across my soul,
Those words he whispered
That somehow made me whole.
Even though time
Has caused us to drift away,
I still remember "Hey Cutie..."
Like it was yesterday.
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Hey Cutie!

Contributed by ginsdance on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 01:39:49 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

My self-esteem had been
Chipped away and battered
By guys who had always thought
That I simply didn't matter,
I had started to chip away
At my own inner-beauty
Until HE walked up to me,
Whistled, and said "Hey Cutie!"
I blushed and turned bright red
Oh my head was turning,
Then he asked me for my number
And I knew my face was burning.
He called me right after work
And set up our first date
We were a perfect match...
If someone could just relate
To the healing balm
That stretched across my soul,
Those words he whispered
That somehow made me whole.
Even though time
Has caused us to drift away,
I still remember "Hey Cutie..."
Like it was yesterday.

Copyright © ginsdance ... [ 2002-08-01 13:39:49]
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Re: Hey Cutie! (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 04:04:05 PM AEST
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great write and my face was burning while reading it only cause it brought similar memories back to me of long ago.... excellent poetry

Re: Hey Cutie! (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 05:18:22 PM AEST
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A lovely poem Gin...such a special memory for you.
Love Chrissie x

Re: Hey Cutie! (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 08:14:38 PM AEST
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aww this was great, what a lovely memory to to hold on to and relive. What a boost when you most needed it. Wonder where he is now?

Re: Hey Cutie! (User Rating: 1 )
by Thumbsucker on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 03:08:52 PM AEST
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Hiya Gin,

I love this one, so upbeat and uplifting.
Brought a smile to my face too.
Gary

Re: Hey Cutie! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 05:56:58 PM AEST
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He's a bit more forward than I, then.
It sounds like you had fun.

Good write.

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