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Array ( [sid] => 156199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Failure is... [time] => 2009-12-24 03:42:24 [hometext] => My fiancee's friend passed away recently and since then, she just hasn't been the same. I have tried everything to help her cope, but it didn't work. We just split up and I don't want to talk to my family or friends about it. So I am here. [bodytext] => Failure is...my insufficient ways
Failure is...the sadness upon your face
Failure is...all these empty bottles of beer
Failure is...the severity of my tears
Failure is...the promises I couldn't keep
Failure is...despite my efforts, you still weep
Failure is...our forever after that slipped away
Failure is...the happiness that couldn't stay
Failure is...the only constant in my life
Failure is...never making you my wife
Failure is...the only reflection that I see
Failure is...everywhere
Failure is...me

-djs 12/24/2009 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => djs [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Failure is...

Contributed by djs on Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 03:42:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Failure is...my insufficient ways
Failure is...the sadness upon your face
Failure is...all these empty bottles of beer
Failure is...the severity of my tears
Failure is...the promises I couldn't keep
Failure is...despite my efforts, you still weep
Failure is...our forever after that slipped away
Failure is...the happiness that couldn't stay
Failure is...the only constant in my life
Failure is...never making you my wife
Failure is...the only reflection that I see
Failure is...everywhere
Failure is...me

-djs 12/24/2009

Copyright © djs ... [ 2009-12-24 03:42:24]
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Re: Failure is... (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 04:24:08 AM AEST
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There is so much upset within these words,
such a heartfelt & aching write.
but If you have tried everything, been everything,
given everything..... then you have not failed x
Strength of character is built so much on
tough times like these, but be safe in the knowledge that you
are passionate enough to fight for what you
believe in, and hold that thought. Time may
well be the answer here x
Star x x x

Re: Failure is... (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 05:02:20 AM AEST
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You can only try your best my friend, give it a bit more time, i understand how upset you feel.

Take care
Fuzzy

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