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Array ( [sid] => 156193 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm asking you to give in [time] => 2009-12-23 19:16:52 [hometext] => Personal experince [bodytext] => There's a secret I have.
One that's kept close.
You all only know half,
like no red on a rose.

It's full of transparency,
yet as real as it gets.
Like the amount of arrogancy,
and luck in your bets.

The Queen, the pauper,
The King, the maid.
Which role for it is proper,
for the choices we've made.

Do you forgive me,
for the sins I've done?
One left to see,
then I'll know I've won.

Construction, Destruction,
Dissolving, and reconciliation.
I think that I should mention,
One's for real - the other for demonstration.

Rock bottom is where I go.
Or headed straight up to the clouds,
living in heaven, enjoying the show.
Or at the bottom, hidden in shrouds.

I held you once,
maybe never again.
Will we ever start?
Or is it already the end? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 71 [informant] => vNeutralv [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

I'm asking you to give in

Contributed by vNeutralv on Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 07:16:52 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

There's a secret I have.
One that's kept close.
You all only know half,
like no red on a rose.

It's full of transparency,
yet as real as it gets.
Like the amount of arrogancy,
and luck in your bets.

The Queen, the pauper,
The King, the maid.
Which role for it is proper,
for the choices we've made.

Do you forgive me,
for the sins I've done?
One left to see,
then I'll know I've won.

Construction, Destruction,
Dissolving, and reconciliation.
I think that I should mention,
One's for real - the other for demonstration.

Rock bottom is where I go.
Or headed straight up to the clouds,
living in heaven, enjoying the show.
Or at the bottom, hidden in shrouds.

I held you once,
maybe never again.
Will we ever start?
Or is it already the end?

Copyright © vNeutralv ... [ 2009-12-23 19:16:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm asking you to give in (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 05:10:20 AM AEST
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well written.

Take care
Fuzzy

Re: I'm asking you to give in (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexa_Bachtel on Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 11:04:42 AM AEST
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I held you once,
maybe never again.
Will we ever start?
Or is it already the end?

really nice poem. well written.
Take care & Merry Xmas.
Alexa

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