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Array ( [sid] => 156188 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Gun In My Mouth [time] => 2009-12-23 17:44:41 [hometext] => its tearing me to pieces [bodytext] => The gun in my mouth
Is bitter in taste
If I pull the trigger
My life shall be erased

No more pain
Or a broken heart
It seems like death
Is a fresh new start

Each gasp for breath
Brings me pain
It's complete agony
It courses through my veins

I gasp for air
I need you here
Stop me please
Save me from the fear

It's taking hold
Breaking me apart
I tear at my flesh
And rip out my heart

I look in relief
At the bloody pieces
What's left of my heart
And my breathing ceases [comments] => 4 [counter] => 330 [topic] => 32 [informant] => fallensaint [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
The Gun In My Mouth

Contributed by fallensaint on Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 05:44:41 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



The gun in my mouth
Is bitter in taste
If I pull the trigger
My life shall be erased

No more pain
Or a broken heart
It seems like death
Is a fresh new start

Each gasp for breath
Brings me pain
It's complete agony
It courses through my veins

I gasp for air
I need you here
Stop me please
Save me from the fear

It's taking hold
Breaking me apart
I tear at my flesh
And rip out my heart

I look in relief
At the bloody pieces
What's left of my heart
And my breathing ceases




Copyright © fallensaint ... [ 2009-12-23 17:44:41]
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Re: The Gun In My Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by KarinaGutierrez121 on Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 05:50:41 PM AEST
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I like this one a lot.


Re: The Gun In My Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 05:54:55 PM AEST
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WOW, awsome writing,
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Re: The Gun In My Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 11:01:04 PM AEST
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some write well written.
Take care.

It's taking hold
Breaking me apart
I tear at my flesh
And rip out my heart


Re: The Gun In My Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by AshlenaAres on Monday, 25th January 2010 @ 05:55:10 AM AEST
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I need you here
Stop me please.♥

If I were to pull the trigger, I wouldnt feel it.





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