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Array ( [sid] => 156120 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Things They Say [time] => 2009-12-20 21:16:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This coldness surrounds me, paralyzing deep;
Dear God please just let me breathe.
I long to run so far from here;
They say it's worse this time of year.
They tell me all this things, you see:
They all try to say that they still need me.
There is no proof, no evidence of truth.
Analytical to a fault - That's what I do.
They tell me that it's just a phase:
To grow up, move on, it'll be okay.
It's all a lie; no one understands-
No one sees the world the way I can.
"I will never let you fall"
I swear I'll stay for you,
But I don't think the risk is something I can still do. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ChaosFactor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Things They Say

Contributed by ChaosFactor on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 09:16:14 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

This coldness surrounds me, paralyzing deep;
Dear God please just let me breathe.
I long to run so far from here;
They say it's worse this time of year.
They tell me all this things, you see:
They all try to say that they still need me.
There is no proof, no evidence of truth.
Analytical to a fault - That's what I do.
They tell me that it's just a phase:
To grow up, move on, it'll be okay.
It's all a lie; no one understands-
No one sees the world the way I can.
"I will never let you fall"
I swear I'll stay for you,
But I don't think the risk is something I can still do.

Copyright © ChaosFactor ... [ 2009-12-20 21:16:14]
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Re: The Things They Say (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 09:59:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece. I can relate. I feel like I need to escape the present myself. I feel the sorrow and the corruption of the world so intensely. People are always saying that it will get better. I can truly relate. Again great writing. Your poem got me thinking. I am sorry for the rambling response. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Heidi

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