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Array ( [sid] => 1561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Eyes [time] => 2002-08-01 13:37:55 [hometext] => Not to be confused with Peter Gabriels song.
[bodytext] => I walk through the caverns of your eyes,
I see the many candles that fuel your soul.
Now I kneel before you and ask to light my
own.

I swim in the pools of your eyes.
And see the many gems that make them
sparkle so.
Now I kneel before you and offer a gem of my
own.

I'm lost in the universe of your eyes.
I see the many suns that fuel your mind.
Now I kneel before you and offer suns of my
own.

I'm drunk with the promise of your eyes.
I see the love that springs from your soul.
Now I kneel before you and give love of my
own. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 2 [informant] => spaceotter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Your Eyes

Contributed by spaceotter on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 01:37:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I walk through the caverns of your eyes,
I see the many candles that fuel your soul.
Now I kneel before you and ask to light my
own.

I swim in the pools of your eyes.
And see the many gems that make them
sparkle so.
Now I kneel before you and offer a gem of my
own.

I'm lost in the universe of your eyes.
I see the many suns that fuel your mind.
Now I kneel before you and offer suns of my
own.

I'm drunk with the promise of your eyes.
I see the love that springs from your soul.
Now I kneel before you and give love of my
own.

Copyright Â© spaceotter ... [ 2002-08-01 13:37:55]
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Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 01:47:26 PM AEST
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What a wonderful sentiment... an equal love... this is beautiful!
Ginsdance

Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 05:20:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful, romantic poem of mutual love. I love this
Chrissie

Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 08:07:37 PM AEST
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As the ocean is never full of water, so is the heart never full of love.

you sound hopelessly in love!
beautiful write.

Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by fancyface4898 on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:28:39 PM AEST
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That is such a sweet poem. You really know how to touch a persons heart

Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 05:59:32 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful
I really enjoyed this beautiful expression
of your love Adam, Thanks for sharing
this one, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by angelrae on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 07:23:43 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem of love. The eyes tell deep secrets into our soul. Thank you for touching my heart.

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