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if i give up what would i be

Contributed by cross211 on Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 10:49:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



if i give up what would i be,I don't care what happen's to me, i know my life is as crazy as it can ever be. every since my daughter was taken away from me.i wish god would take away from that angel that was never sent to me.sometime's i blame it all on me, and i know life isn't for me cause i have a daughter i can't even see. she's an angel they took from me. i wonder if she is thinking of me.if i give up i wonder where she would be. if she would always remember me.her love will always remain next to me.and i want her angel to watch over me,as i pray for you mariah on bended knee.i love you mariah your all around me, even though your dad took you away from me i know your probably pretty as can be.god sent me a angel that i can't even see.




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Re: if i give up what would i be (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 06:23:47 AM AEST
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Hope one day you will be reunited.

Take care


Re: if i give up what would i be (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 07:59:33 PM AEST
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Very emotional write. I hope soon God brings your angel home to be with you.

Deadwriter




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