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[title] => Unconditional Release
[time] => 2009-12-17 18:03:56
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[bodytext] => Unconditional Release Staring at the pages, not a one with a drop of ink Deeper into the chair I let myself sink Thousands of words flowing through my brain Waiting to be releases like an early spring rain I asked and I begged for the words to leave Please Lord, grant me a temporary reprieve Why can’t I pick and choose the writes I do? Why did I agree to do this for you? Hundreds of writes swirl around and around Getting so dizzy that I fall to the ground Now God! I demand that this cease! I expect an immediate unconditional release! To walk away and never write another piece Surely would set the raging river to peace I remember those days when my mind was clear But then I remember those were the times my heart had fear Please God, let me change my demand Let me be again be guided by your hand But from my brain give these writes their unconditional release They are not mine to control, to my mind please bring peace Deadwriter 12/13/2009 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 61 [informant] => deadwriter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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